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No one knows the year she’s had
Oh this stunning girl
The sun weak compared to her
Her beauty rules this world

She is love, call it perfect
Dear to every curl
Pray with all that she will make it
Shed a tear for this mistress pearl

She is disfigured, all since birth
But she is my beautiful girl
She captivated my soul while she lost hers
All is vacant in her world

From her pain she mutilates her mind
Her suffering more than most can handle, she turns her body askew
To her open wound I grasp my hand
I, my girl love you

No one knows the year we’ve had
Me and my dream girl
Her inner beauty, make stars cry in self pity
Her beauty rules my world
©2008-2009 ~imaHERO100
:iconimahero100:

Author's Comments

I haven't been writing anything good lately and this is my favorite of the recent. I have just been kinda wanting something new or different. This is the closest I can get right now

Anywho! This is just kinda my tribute to people who have been through a lot and still are going through a lot maybe. But they keep going anyways, no matter how painful, or agonizing it may be. Also a thing I was thinking about while writing was the thought of self-injury. They say its harder to stop than a drug, I hold Nothing at all against people with that problem but I pity them with all my heart.

And really just how much inner beauty that takes and to me that is the most beautiful thing in the world. So that was just kind of my point there I guess.

Critisism is appriciated and I am very open to it, questions, all that jazz. Hope you like it

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:iconterrathefox:
Thats amazing <3 I love it. ;w;

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There are times when you make me want to MURDER YOU!
:iconchibiofdoom:
Aww that's sweet. XD

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